William 15

Hi Everyone,
Here is my narrative I wrote.
Adventure in the Amazon
One day Mr Beer and Mr Wine the school teachers, took the year 4s on a trip to the Amazon rainforest. They flew to the Amazon in a big Qantas jet that Mr Wine flew for them. After a long boring flight Mr Wine was looking for somewhere to land. But before they found somewhere the plane ran out of fuel and crash landed deep in the Amazon rainforest.
As the plane had crashed everyone aboard had to find a way to get out. The kids thought that it was great fun smashing the windows with their backpacks to get out. Once they had all got out safely Mr Wine and Mr Beer had a good long look at the map to try and figure out where they were. After a lot of confusion they decided to walk around and explore because they had no idea where they were.
Mr Beer knew in the Amazon that nightfall came really quickly so they decided to set up camp for the night. They needed a roof to keep dry from the rain and luckily they had their swags with them to sleep in. One of the kids suggested that they get a fire going. Mr Beer and Mr Wine both agreed that they should get the kids to start collecting wood. After Mr Wine persevered a lot of times they had a roaring fire. After they had built their shelter the kids were whining because they were hungry. While Mr Beer and Mr Wine were deciding what to eat one of the kids decided it would be a good idea to start eating the note pads in the back packs, luckily Mr Beer and Mr Wine saw them and made them stop.
Mr Wine said that we have a very yucky dinner for you tonight, it will be roast spiders with beetle gravy! All the kids yelled together “YUCK”!! Nah we are just joking assured Mr Beer. We are going to go and have a quick fish and see what we can catch. After quickly making some rods out of strong sticks and jungle vines, they were ready to fish after they caught some bugs to use as bait. After 10 minutes one of the kids jumped up excitedly, “I think I have a bite, I think I have a bite”. Mr Beer told Josh who had got the bite to hold on and not let go. After Mr Beer quickly got his line out of the water, he helped Josh reel in a huge piranha. Mr Beer said stay away from his mouth as he may bite you.
After Mr Beer was sure that the piranha was dead completely, he put it over the fire to cook it. After a dinner of yummy piranha they decided to go to bed. They all climbed into their warm comfy swags. The next morning they decided to go on a nature walk.
After a good sleep and a yummy breakfast of left over piranha they decided to go on their nature walk. After a bit of arguing they finally decided to set off east. Mr Beer told all the kids to stick together so no one got lost.
After some really fun exploring and bird spying they discovered a waterfall. Everyone was amazed at the find. When all the kids were seeing if they could see any fish Mr Wine called” Who wants to go for a swim?” Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! , yelled all the Kids at once. After everyone hurried into their bathers, they jumped in to the cool relaxing water. Mr Beer said he would stay out of the water to make something. After a nice long swim everyone wanted to get out. Mr Beer announced that he had just made a spear so that they could try and hunt some fish. Mr Beer asked everyone to collect some wood for a fire once they were dry. In the mean time Mr Beer went for a swim with the spear he made. When he dived deep down into the pool he sometimes managed to catch fish. After Mr Beer had caught 14 fish with the spear he got out and gave the fish to Mr Wine to cook on the fire. After a big yummy lunch of fish they decided to do some more exploring.
When the rest of the Kids were walking along one kid named Cody stopped to have a look at a spider. After he had a good look at the spider he was going to join the rest of his friends but he could not see them anymore!!!!!! He tried to call to his friends but he got no reply. He was lost in the big dark scary Amazon rainforest.
Meanwhile back at the group Mr Beer had just spotted a Toucan, and he told all the Kids to be quite so they don’t scare him. “Cody,” Called Mr Beer, “come and take a photo of the Toucan” No one answered. Finally Larry said “I can’t see Cody.” Mr Beer had a look around “that is strange” Kate said “I think I saw him looking at a spider an hour ago.
Cody was scared while he was lost in the rainforest. All of a sudden he heard rustling in the trees! Cody didn’t know what it was so he was very scared. All of a sudden a little Emperor Tamarin monkey appeared out of the trees. “If you follow me I will lead you back to the others,” said the monkey in a squeaky voice. Cody followed obediently. “Why are you so slow?” squeaked the Monkey “I can’t ran as fast as you” answered Cody.
When Cody and the Monkey got back to the camp everyone was very relieved and happy Cody was ok. Every one thanked the little monkey and then the monkey scampered back into the trees. After a big sleep every one was happy again in the morning.
That day they decided to go on another walk and try and find other people. When they were walking Kate shouted excitedly “Is that a house I can see?” “Yes” yelled Mr Beer and Mr Wine at the same time. When they got to the houses the realised it had an airport so they jumped on the first plane that went to Alice Springs!
Everyone was very happy to be going home.
The End
From William.