Erin 17

Hello
Here is my narrative.

Cheers Erin



The Mermaid Tale
In 1824, there was a world under the reef called, Mermaina. In that town lived two mermaids called Taniaena and Erina with their little brothers Channing and Tatum. The mermaids were best of friends.

One day they took their little brothers to the park. As they were swimming along the park they fell in a hole. Which didn’t end, as they fell the hole got lighter, lighter and lighter. Then at the end of the hole there was a big sign saying ‘BLUE TANG LAND’.

In that land there were mermaids and merboys just like Erina, Taniaena, Channing and Tatum. As they were swimming they swam into Glazia and Efron.
Taniaena said “Hi I’m Taniaena and this is Erina and her little brother Tatum and my little brother Channing.”
“Well nice to meet you. I’m Glazia and this is my little cousin Efron, he is staying for a holiday” said Glazia.
“Can you please show us around if you don’t mind?” asked Channing.
“Sure” said Glazia happily.

“This is Green Plaza, best place to shop for nautical miles” told Glazia.
‘And this is Squid prison worst place around” said Efron disgustedly.
“Wow, what’s that?” gasped Erina.
“Oh that’s Sea Shell Palace where my Aunty and Uncle live. Well they are the King and Queen and Glazia’s parents.” said Efron.

“But, there has been some trouble someone has stolen the magical and powerful ‘Glow fish’” gasped Glazia.
“Too bad” replied Tatum.
“Hey maybe Erina could help she has always wanted to be a detective. She once solved the crime of who stole the Queen’s crown in our land.” said Taniaena.
“Really?” questioned Glazia.
“Great” said Efron.
“Whoa whoa whoa, I never said I would do it” said Erina angrily.
‘Oh please oh please, it would help Blue Tang land retain its glow back please” said Efron hopefully.
“Fine I will do it. But I will need all the help I can get” said Erina. She was not very pleased.
“Great” said Tatum.
“Awesome” said Channing.
“Perfect” said Efron.

“Have you picked up any clues so far Erina?” asked Glazia.
“Well I have a feeling that each shop with the word glow in its name has something to do with it. And yes that might sound weird but trust me” Erina told them.
Erina was right each shop new a little something about a little something. The Glow Chinese shop said that they knew nothing, but they did know something. Erina and everyone else investigated the shop while they were serving a customer. They found a note saying (Mer park be there 4:00).So at 4:00 they snuck and hid behind coral at Mer park.

Erina decided the only way to hear what they were saying was to dress Channing and Tatum up like mermaids and make them swim past them with a tape recorder.
Efron asked “why?”
“So we can have some fun on the way” replied Erina.
When the boys came back. They played the tape back to themselves. It said the fish is in the pond next to the giant coral statue.

“Perfect” said Erina.
So they went to the pond next to the coral and found the fish. They put the fish in Glazia’s hand and took it back to the Palace. The King and Queen were very pleased with the children and were happy that the glow was back in the land. Well it was time for Erina, Taniaena, Channing and Tatum to go back to Mermaina.

The End